Scorp and Sage

These are two characters from the manga I'm currently working on.

These two are a set of twins from Japan. The only things they have in common is they're both very athletic and their hair is the same cut, but it's long on opposite sides and styled differently. (Sage actually brushes his hair. LOL) They also share the same goals in the story.

Scorp (Left) is the wild, out going one, he likes to party and hang with friends. He also enjoys practicing to fight with two rapiers. (Pirate type swords)

Sage (Right) Is the quiet, solemn one. He is friendly but shy and keeps to himself. He uses a bow and arrow.

So my question is, do they look cool? LOL
Please tell me what you think!

I drew it with ink and color pencils.